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LostLegend Head Admin
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| Subject: Rank Check - Obtain Your Rank Here! Thu Aug 26, 2010 12:53 pm | |
| Post here with the Roleplay sample you intend to use in your character application form. I can tell you which rank you roleplay up to the standard of. (Academy Student - Jounin)
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| | | Horror Rogue Ninja
Posts : 118 Rank : S-rank Element : Suiton, Raiton Major Skill : Fuuinjutsu Minor Skills : Medical
Ninja Stats Ryo: 100 Jutsu: Substitution, Doppelgangers, Transformation, Hidden Mist Jutsu, Suiben - Water Whip, Ninja Art: Grudge Rain, Hiraishin - Sparking Electric Needle,
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| Rp sample using Kisame ~ From past site - Spoiler:
Warm air blew through the quiet forest. Wild mushrooms fumbled int the hands of a small squirrel as it raced across the damp grass. A sole figure traveled beneath a covering of thick shadows. The cushioning rubber of his shoes pressed down on a small twig, snapping it into pieces. He gave no interest towards it like most would when trying to make little notice to themselves. His path slithered it's way through trees and around brush, deep into the thick forest. The bells on his kama jingled as he strolled. His advancement stopping only once at the sound of a large explosion in the distance. At that time he stopped and look to the sky, his eerie red eyes pirecing through the darkness of the shadow that cast over him. The color matched by the ominous red clouds that adorned his black cloak. His head lowered once again to the forest below, and he continued back upon his path into the forest.
The cloaked man reached his destination some time later. A large stone coming into his view. Upon it sat a large man, his skin a strange hue of blue and his clothes matching those of his. The man's name was Hoshigaki Kisame, his partner. While it wasn't his choice to be teamed with this man, he was however the most bearable of the choices. His large sword was stuck into the ground below him, the hilt resting in his hand as he turned his head aknowledging the other's presence. His fre arm rose and gave a slight wave to the red eyed man.
"Hoy."
The man rose his hand, pushing up the kama so as to allow his face to be seen by the other.
"Kisame, did it go as planned?"
The shark featured man lifted his head and let out a huff. He crossed his arms across his chest, and left his foot to hold his blade in place.
"Of course! No chance in hell they were gonna get in my way."
Kisame lifted his right hand up a bit, and pointed to the other side of the rock. A smirk creeped it's way across his face.
"Can't say I like this sort of tactic. But I got the woman. She's over there, sleeping soundly."
Intrigued the man stepped towards where the other pointed. The paper hanging down the kama slowly shifted off of his shoulders and fell into open air, as he lifted the large straw hat up to get a good look at the woman. She was bound and gagged, not much of a suprise. She was of mild importance. She had only one purpose, and the man hoped greatly that her use will aid them well. His hand rose, showing a odd ring upon his finger. It brushed back a stray strand of hair from his eye before vanishing again beneath the cloak as he rose back up.
"So are you satified Itachi? Can we get to the fun part now?"
Kisame swung his blade up, it's large mass crashing down onto his shoulder like nothing more then a feather to him. Itachi reached up and removed his kama, letting a small ray of light break through onto his face. He was one of the three last remaining Uchiha, the others well knowingly destroyed by his own hands. His gazed went upwards, towards a large cloud of smoke far off in the distance. His eyes turned back towards Kisame. Those eyes, they are more then likely the reason why Kisame isn't as expressive as the others. From what little travel they have had together, he knows all to well the power that lays behind Itachi's Sharigan.
"Yes. All we need to do now is wait for the hunt to take out bait. A plan like this is more suited when taking out a Jinchuuriki. Had we done it your way, we might have been surrounded before we could capture him. With this method, we can lure the Yonbi out into our location, defeat him, and excape before any other can add to our troubles. Let's not make this a huge ordeal shall we?"
A satisfied grin came over Kisame's face as he sliped down off of the rock. He didn't care about Itachi's plan, he just wanted to get a little exercise. Itachi of ocurse knew this, he come to learn much about Kisame in thier travels, and given the situation there was no need to hold him back this time. Thier mission was simple, bring back the Yonbi. How it is done is irrelevent. It was an added bonus having Kisame fired up. This means he won't have to waste needed strength, and end up worsening his condition.
Once again Itachi's feet treaded across the the forest floor. He wanted the battle away from the woman. this way the host couldn't just grab her and run, he would have to defeat them to learn where she was. A second pair of footsteps followed behind him, these of course belonging to Kisame. It wouldn't be too much farther until they would meet up with the advancing Yonbi. His rather barbarian appearnce was a bit of a suprise to Itachi. However one of the former Jinchuuriki was a man clad with armor from head to toe.
Rage enveloped the man's face, a emotion that Itachi was counting on. While it may make the man more likely to release his Bijuu, it would also make him more prone to thoughtless attacks. Itachi's hand rose signaling Kisame that he was free to attack now. Kisame grinned, and let his enormous sword slam onto the ground,. With a laugh the blue monster charged at the Jinchuuriki the blade scrapping across the ground. The man began to move through a series of hand seals, thier effect block from view because of Kisame's large body. Kisame's massive blade swung down on the man, creating a sound almost as descrutive as Deidara's exploding clay. A cloud of dirt formed in the air around Kisame's blade, and the man. Kisame's grin removed itself as he lifted his blade to hear nothing but cracking earth below it. As the dirt settled a small dome of earth had covered the Jinchuuriki and let Kisame's attack useless. However Itachi could tell something was wrong, and it didn't take him too long for him to figure it out.
"Kisame!"
Itachi called out ot Kisame in a low but strict tone. However it wasn't fast enough, as before Kisame coud even turn hsi head the man erupted out of the ground behind Kisame and grabbed a tight hold of the Akatsuki's clothes. His foot planted against Kisame's back and with brute strength he pulled back and used his legs to lift and toss Kisame violently into a thick tree behind Itachi. The tree was easily crushed by Kisame's weight, and slowly fell to the ground, shaking Itachi who never moved a muscle. The man's strength was impressive, Itachi wasn't expecting that. A loud smashed from behind him came into Itachi's ears, he turned his head slightly towards Kisame, whom was now rising out of the mess he was thrown into.
"Are we done taking a nap?"
Kisame scuffed at Itachi. Itachi knew all the right things to say to get Kisame to take a fight seriously. They didn't have much time, and he didn't want to waste a moment of it.
"Lets see how he likes this!"
Kisame slammed his Samehada into the ground and clasped his hands together. His head went back a bit, preparing to release something from his mouth. Itachi knew exactly what he was doing, and quickly jumped into the branches above. A moment later Kisame released a massive body of water from his gullet. While Itachi would have been against such a position showing move, it did however pull the advantage of the fight towards Kisame's side. The blue monster graped his blade's hilt again. His other hand slammed down onto the surface of the water, sending a wave of chakra through it. MOments later the water below began to shift oddly and take the form a team of sharks. They quickly advancd through the water toward the Jinchuuriki. Kisame followed thier path as well, himself riding a wave. His lifted his Samehada like a bat, ready to smash it into the man if he even tried to jump off of the water's surface. However Kisame's plan was already demolished at the man's next assulat. His body erupted in lightning chakra. The sharks below were reduced to nothing, and Kisame was taken off guard and shocked by the release. The man quickly followed up, sending a lightning filled fist into Kisame's stomach. If there was ever a weakness in Kisame it was lightning, the very bane of water.
Seconds after the man attacked Kisame, he vanished. Of course Itachi could see it all, his Sharigan watching the man's every move during the fight. HE appeared behind Itachi, his hand once again filled with Lightning. However such an attack towards Itachi was useless. He didnt' move a muscle as the man's fist smashed into his back, and sent lightning chraging throgh ish body. As the two hung int the air he only whispered a single word.
"Fool.."
The moment the word ended, a explosion erupted around the two. The Jinchuuriki was sent flying, slamming into a tree and bounching off it like a tennis ball. Itachi however was nowhere to be seen. It was a clever trap, having a special shadow clone go in his place, and once attacked it would explode right in the face of the uknowing opponent. As the Jinchuuriki began to rise from the ground, a set of footsteps behind him quicklygot his attention. As he turned his blood soaked head a unharmed figure of Itachi appeared from out of the shadows of the trees. Just from Itachi's unfaultering presence he could tell he was out matched. the man took the only path he know to overpower the Akatsuki.
His chakra began to erupt around him. However Itachi wasn't about to let him take the easy way in this fight. The moment the man focused his attention towards releasing his demon power, Itachi closed in on the man, taking him in suprise. His blood red eyes facing the man's. A moment later the man fell to the ground, an unconcious lump of flesh. Itachi brushed his hair to the side as he stared down at the man. A rustling came from behind him, as Kisame came out from behind a bush rubbing the back of his head.
"I had it handled."
"Enough. Pick him up and lets head for the extraction point."
Kisame snarlled, he never liked it when Itachi ordered him around. Itachi on the other hand was upset at the fact that Kisame so foolishly handled this fight. He could tell that he still had his thoughts on that Konoha shinobi, Maito Guy. He didn't blame him, it wasn't often that Kisame is struck off guard. Itachi turned and began to walk back into the forest. Kisame reached down and picked up the Jinchuuriki, throwing him over his shoulder. He swung his Samehada over his back and into it's sling while walking to catch up.
"What should we do about his woman?"
Leave her, she is of no concern to us anymore."
Itachi didn't even bother looking back to respond to him. He cared little of anything else now. Pein wanted this Jinchuuriki, and he was going to give it to him. Once that once done he could do what he wanted without any objections from him. He knew that the Konoha shinobi would be moving soon to find them. That boy, Naruto. His attachment to Sasuke was great, perhaps for Itachi it was time to meet him face to face. Itachi pulled out his kama, slipping it onto his head as he walked into the shadows of the forest. Soon he would have to face Sasuke, and the truth will finally be learned. He could feel it in his blood.
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| Subject: Re: Rank Check - Obtain Your Rank Here! Sun Oct 10, 2010 8:42 pm | |
| From My own Naruto Rpg Website - Spoiler:
Water Jutsu: The Beginning Cont. pt3
The clones now fully stable were able to walk but they were not complete. They could not run, they could not jump, he didn't know if they could even fend for themselves in a battle yet. Kamisori had the two clones walk towards each other. At first they began at a steady pace but soon the clones began to sprint at each other. Each one began to scowl at the other as they ran towards each other to attack with their raised fists. As the clones reached each other each aimed their fist at the other's face and as the blow connected all the momentum gained during the run towards each other carried through as they turned into large amounts of water that clashed into each other. As the clones died in a watery mess that clashed around each other Kamisori had already begun preparing the two more new clones that would soon pick up where the last two clones left off. Kamisori clasped his hands together and said, "Water clone jutsu", as two figures of water rose on either side of Kamisori. The waters that rose soon had arms and legs flow out of it while the head came out. These clones, unlike the last, were almost instantly colored and textured to become almost exact physical copies of Kamisori. The copies slowly began to move and come to life. They each ran to opposite sides in front of Kamisori creating a triangle between the three Kamisori's. The clones then began a full on charge towards each other. This time the clones were in the gentle fist stance that Kamisori would have been if he rushed and opponent. The two came closer towards one another and soon they hit. Both clones recoiled from the blow but each on was still tangible. Kamisori began to jog over towards them when one of the clones became unstable and turned into water. Kamisori stood their devastated, wondering why the clone had failed but now was not the time. Now he had to concentrate more on how to make this not happen. Kamisori immediately summoned two more clones. These clones came up much faster than the ones before them. Kamisori now with three clones around him decided it was best for him to test their tangibility. Kamisori allowed the clones to charge him all at once. First turning to the one on his left Kamisori rushed it and as it came close dodge its left fist. Kamsori then knelt onto one knee and used his arm to trip the clone. The clone being a copy of him quickly rolled and smirked at him. As he turned around he was able to see the second clone jumping high into the air with the help of the clone he'd just flipped. The third clone then came at him, the only way he knew was because his byakugan saw it. Kamisori quickly flipped back and then quickly rolled sideways as the clone in the air came down striking the water beside him. The impact caused a small wave that pushed Kamisori back some, then the first clone punched in the midst of this in his jaw. As the blow hit his face Kamisori realized that these clones were almost perfect they even seemed to have the correct mass that was needed to make a good punch. Kamisori tumbled back across the water rolling over himself three times before he began to sink. Under the water now Kamisori kicked until he got near the surface then he coated his hands with chakra and reached up using the surface as a way to pull himself up from being under the water. After getting his torso up, Kamisori concentrated the chakra on his feet and knees to help hoist himself out of the water. Kamisori realized he was facing three copies of himself that now might be almost on the same level as he was since they were almost a complete technique. Kamisori stood up and soon he put his hands together and said, "Water clone jutsu", and as he said these words three more clones rose from behind him. "Heh, now this is what I wanted". For the first time since he had been back in the village that twinkle in his eye for a good fight came back. Kamisori rushed two of the clones and activated his byakugan allowing the view of the whole battle field to fill his mind. The two clones that were in his left eye's vision also came to get him. As they punched he was able to easily dodge and then he quickly took his right leg and brought it up behind him as he bent forward. This kick pushed the clone back and as he came all the way around he punched the other. Just then Kamisori jumped up in the air doing the splits in the air as two of the other clones dove forward from behind him and into his left eye's sight. He quickly jumped back and then flipped to land safely on the ground. The two clones ahead of him rushed him as two more came from the back. One of the clones behind him was ahead of the others so Kamisori slid his leg back and bent down some and clasped the clone around its arm and leg then he span around and used it as a projectile to push one of the others back. The other one in front of him cam e and punched for his head and as he did Kamisori allowed himself to fall to his knees as he punched the clone in the stomach sending it back. As the last clone came from behind Kamisori put his hands on the water and used his left leg to kick the opponent in the face. Now where were the other two. He looked around and then he found them. They were under him! Kamisori quickly span to his left using his arms to propel himself and found the two clones come up out of the water and land in front of him. Kamisori ran towards the first and he used and open fist to disturb the flow of chakra in the clone causing it to disintegrate. Then after charging with the last clone he jumped over it and as he was parallel to the clone he struck down behind the clones neck and caused it to lose its form. The four other clones were now back up and charging straight for him. Kamisori ran for the clones to and jumped over this bunch to land in the middle of the group, the clones began immediately attacking him. Using his byakugan he was able to dodge most the attacks and even direct some of the attacks at each other. Kamisori then took initiative to destroy two by using the gentle fist aimed in their stomachs. The next two clones he ran to attack but as he did they vanished. Kamisori realized he was very low on chakra; he'd just summoned over ten clones and used the mist jutsu at least three times before he began learning the water clone. Kamisori slowly walked to the edge of the pond but as he did he realized that right before he stepped off his left leg fell through the water. Lucky for Kamisori the pond was shallow at that part and his leg was able to touch the ground. Kamisori sat down on the rocky ground with a few plants by the area. He slowly reached over towards the coat that his grandfather left and he reached into the right inner pocket. This pocket held a small little pack of food that he had purchased while he was in the food district. The meal contained a small piece of bread and some rice that had chicken. Kamsori pulled out a pair of chopsticks and began to eat his small meal. Though it wasn't much Kamisori was able to gain some strength from the food. After finishing the food Kamisori grabbed a bottle of water which he'd stored in his coat. After he'd finished Kamisori sat on the sandy, stoney ground and took a little nap.
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A small child was walking around a large room. At the age of 4 the child was not very experienced but he was bright. As he toddled around the room he was able to see the many objects. The room contained a large table and a large sofa. The small child walked over to the couch and tried to pull himself up. He wasn't able to get up but soon he was lifted off the ground and felt himself land on the couch. As he used his whole body and arms to turn himself around on the large fluffy couch that he seemed to sink into. As he looked up he saw a tall man that seemed to be many times larger than himself. The man had a great big smile on his face and soon one of the massive hands began to descend upon the small child. The child began reacting by twisting inward trying to protect himself, but soon the large hand invaded his small barrier and began tenderly touching his small little stomach. The little boy began to writhe in pleasure as small squeals filled the air and his little eyes turned to small slits. After laughing for some time the child was once again lifted into the air where the man was holding him under his arms. The child stared at the man. The man's face was young and trim. He had a strong jaw and short cropped dark black hair that stuck up in spikes and held hints of purples and blues. The eyes of the man were a beautiful crimson that held gentle feelings within in them. The mans face was adorned with glasses that seemed to hold in those strong yet gentle eyes. As the man held the boy, his face seemed to go away and then come back. Go away, then come back. The small child soon realized it was being tossed in the air. And soon he heard a noise from the other side of the room. As he turned his small head he saw a woman enter the room. This woman donned a long white Kimono and behind her came an old man who wore a large wintery coat that seemed to fit him perfectly. The woman and old man appeared to be related but the small child would not know. The woman had long purple hair that reached her mid back, and slightly fell over one eye. Her small petite figure was a stark contrast to the man who now held the child. The small boy reached out his arms for the woman and one could hear a high voice speak the words, "Mama... mama", as the boy strechted his hands toward the woman. She cam by and picked up the boy and with her gentle lips gave the sweet child a smooth kiss on his fragile head. The young man(•) then spoke. "Isn't he beautiful" "Yes sweety he is.", came softly out of the woman's lips The old man then spoke, "Let me see my grandchild." "Here you go father", she said as she passed the small child into her father's hands. My grandson, my little Kamisori. He said as his eyes turned into small crescents.
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Kamisori woke up peacefully on top of his grandfather's jacket. As he blinked his sleepy eyes he saw how it was only about an hour since he slept. Kamisori quickly got up and began stretching hoping to wake up his sleepy limbs. He then activated his byakugan to check the amount of chakra he had. Using the pale eye he was able to see that almost all of his chakra had been restored. Kamisori, ready to finish the technique, walked to the center of the pond. This time Kamisori raised both hands and clasped them together while he said, "Water Clone Jutsu". Beside him three spheres of water jumped out of the pond and quickly morphed to look like three copies of himself. Kamsori, taught by his mother and teacher's knew that the water clone jutsu, unlike shadow clone could not be used far from the body of water or go and receive info unless it was going to walk back to him also. But Kamisori had reasons for choosing the water clone, first, it was able to use water and conduct lightning. Second, it could be used as medium for water jutsu. Third, it didn't split the user's chakra reserve in half. Now done remembering his choice for this jutsu Kamisori turned to the three clones and nodded. The four bodies went in opposite directions and then turned into face each other. Kamisori then made one disappear and then quickly made another reappear. Next on the second Kamisori threw his fuma shuriken at it and once it sliced through Kamisori activated the water clone jutsu again, causing the split clone to become two. Last on the third clone Kamisori threw his second fuma shuriken at it causing it to split and once its water was free he used hidden mist jutsu causing the mist to expand and once the mist floated around he allowed it to fall.
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Posts : 319 Rank : Kazekage Element : Wind, Earth. Major Skill : Medical Ninjutsu Minor Skills : Tracking, Moving Stealthily
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| Subject: Re: Rank Check - Obtain Your Rank Here! Fri Oct 15, 2010 8:44 am | |
| Some strange sentences there but I'd say if those sentences were fixed, then Jounin. | |
| | | Sai Chuunin
Posts : 2 Rank : Chuunin Element : Fire and Lighting Major Skill : Large Amount Of Chakra Minor Skills : Chakra Hiding,Poison Resistant
Ninja Stats Ryo: 100 Jutsu: Substitution, Doppelgangers, Transformation,Crow clone
| Subject: Re: Rank Check - Obtain Your Rank Here! Fri Oct 22, 2010 11:02 am | |
| Ryu's eyes got wider and became bloodshot red"R-Okay Sir"Ryu said as he stumbled.His skin turned pale and his palms were shaking and had sweat pouring from them His legs were shaking like there was a earthquake happening.Ryu thought to himself before he continued to do what his teacher told him how could he possible do that how could he jump and touch the cave top but ryu was not going to give up on himself.Ryu Gulped hard before he he closed his eyes and rasied his Pale foot stomping it and punching his fist has hard as he could on the cave ground At the same time.When he did his fist felt like a bulldozer just ran over his fist and his legs felt like there where just cut off and soon after still sweating and his eyes still closed He jumped into the air with all his might making sure he doesn't fall and touched the dark brown roof of the pitch black cave and came back down To the ground.Foot first his eyes still closed"how was that sir"He asked Looking like he had just seen a ghost with Some tiny pebbles from the cave roof on his pale shaking hand.
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Ninja Stats Ryo: 100 Jutsu: Substitution, Doppelgangers, Transformation
| Subject: Re: Rank Check - Obtain Your Rank Here! Fri Oct 22, 2010 11:03 am | |
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| | | Kira Yagami Academy Student
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| Subject: Re: Rank Check - Obtain Your Rank Here! Sat Apr 30, 2011 7:13 pm | |
| - Spoiler:
Kira stands before the gates of the village in the fire, the gates stood about sixteen feet tall and had the carving of the village's symbol on it. It is blood red and looks as if that it is about to fall. The gates hinges were covered in rust and one of the screws that holds the hinge in is missing and the other three seem like they are about to fall out. the other hinge looked just as beat up and the rust was even thicker. It seemed as if at the slightest touch it would all come down on the poor bastard that felt brave enough to poke it.
Kira sighs a little and thinks back to the attack on the village hidden in the clouds. That was an attack to remove a dictator, this was an out right slaughter, something Kira had yet to do in his life, but knew would eventually come if he was to become an ANBU operative, the right hand of the devil. Kira recalled how he had created three dragons to obliterate the chambers of the then Raikage, J Uzumaki. The building was struck from three sides and caused the building to essentially implode. It was a fast and expedient way to wreck a building.
Kira walks up to the gates of the village with caution, getting the feeling that the gat could fall at any time. The heat of the sun could be felt on Kira's tan skin. He had yet to start sweating due to the fact his body is used to the heat since Iwa has next to no shade so Kira was always out in the sun to train and hang out with friends, so he learned to ignore the moderate heat of a day around this area of the world. Kira looks back at the decrepit hinges and draws a sword and swings it down, pushing wind chakra into the the blade and uses it to create a wind getsuga.
The blade of air cuts through the wind like it is non existent/ When the whiteish blue colored blade of cutting air makes contact with the top hinge, it cuts the rusted metal device used to hold doors up and allow them to move sheared like a knife cuts through butter. Pieces of metal can be heard as the softly fall onto a giant bed grass. Kira inspects the metal and notices that it would have taken less force to take care of it, then it would take to cut skin.
Kira then has an idea as the weight of the heavy red wooden door begins to make the remaining hinge to fail, burn the damn thing. Kira does some hand signs and says "great fire ball no jutsu". Kira then inhales air till his lungs burn and then exhales long and hard, until he had created a ball of fire about 10 meters in diameter and then lets out one last powerful blow that causes the giant mass of plasma to hurtle towards the door.
When the fireball impacts the massive but weak red door, the metal of the last hinge violently shears and the door falls inward, impacting and destroying a guard tower that had two sleeping chuunin in it. In Kira's eyes, they had failed in their mission and that the destruction of this village. They should have paid attention to the sound of breaking metal and the fact that the door was falling would have been another clue and yet they continued to ignore it. Their reward was being crushed be a door that weighs about two tons.
Kira walks onto the wooden door and notices that it is so thick that he could not feel the bodies below his feet. Kira steps over the edge of the door and into a pool of blood, warm, sticky,crimson blood. Kira grimaces a bit and watches as a guard with a twelve inch bacon and cheese sub walks towards him in shock. Before the poor chuunin could react, his head was at Kira's feet and his blood was adding to the pool, adding to the blood of his crushed comrades. The pool begins to cover Kira's shoes and he flickers away.
Kira did not like the fact he would most likely end up killing more ninja, but then again this is war and war is not pretty. Kira draws his katana and wakashabi and then transforms into one of the guards. Kira runs to a jounin and says "we are under attack, get help". The jounin nods and turns around. As soon as he does, Kira stabs into him with his katana, causing him to collapse into a pool of his own blood. Kira uses the dead jounin's hair to clean his blade and finds what appears to be a bank.
Kira walks into the bank and looks as the guards slowly encroach on him. Kira pretended to be unaware until they were about to be in striking range, until they are within his range and he drops the blades ad then draws Kiba, spinning around, cutting every one of them, killing them all. All of the patrons screamed louder then Kira though possible. Kira then does some hand signs and sucks in air; he sucks in air till his lungs feel like they are about to burst. Kira then exhales a bright blue flame, catching the building on fire. In a few minutes it would be a towering inferno of blue, orange and yellow, like the fires in a fire place; only it will be much larger and hotter.
Kira walks out of the building as the wood from the room caught and moves onto another building. By now most of the people inside had fled and some had run home, others had run to get their things and escape the village while they could, and the rest ran to get the ninja to defend them from this monster who had decided to strike their village. Most of the villagers, in Kira's eyes seemed unaware of the strike on Iwa, the strike for power.
Kira looks at a group of genin coming his way, from the looks of it, they are here for glory, the glory of killing an enemy. They did not know of the pain that comes with that glory. Kira looks at them and says "leave before I am forced to kill you. It is the last thing I want to do, but I will if I must". The genin laugh and say "you can't kill us, you are pathetic". Kira sighs a little and they charge at him, stupidly. Kira does some hand signs and shoots an Aoi honoo at the kids, burning them to death. Their screams echo through the village and Kira knowing that some one will come to investigate, flickers away, in order to find some other building to destroy.
the bodies of the charred genin were found by their former teacher, who had just been promoted to jounin. His flack jacket was freshly made and he was actually on his way to a party to celebrate his moving up when Kira struck. He had a sword on his back and held six kunai. he could use fire water and lightning jutsu, but he was still learning how to use his sword, he decided to learn to use it in order to give him more use.
Kira noticed that a jounin had landed near by and he smiles a little, knowing that he might be able to let loose, it is not often that he gets to fight with a jounin who is willing to fight. Kira looks at him and says "you need to work on that sneaking up thing". The jounin does not responding words, he responds in actions. Kira draws a single blade of Kiba and flickers up to the jounin, slashing at his neck, but is blocked. His blade was cracked and Kira's sword also cut the blade, making it a quarter of the way through the blade.
As the blades pull back from being interlocked with each other, the wielders strike once again, however this time Kira puts an electric current through the blade, cutting through fully and causing the hilt to from the blade, feeling the shock caused by the current flowing from the metal blade to the highly conductible metal of his blade. Kira follows up with a round kick to the knee but is blocked. The jounin does hand signs as Kira throws a flying god tech kunai past the jounin and appears behind him as he spits out a fore dragon and appears behind him and decapitates him with his blade.
As the attack pressed on, the sun began to set in the background. The sky had turned a burnt red color and the the villages hue changed from the bright white paint that the village was done up with. The building have the aura of being red and yet still look white, in that weird manor where they look white and yet at the same time it looks red. Kira was aware that all the light was, was the refraction of light and yet it still awed him. "to bad I have to destroy this place". In Kira's mind it looked a lot better then he had expected after seeing the gate. Kira wondered why they had such a detestable door when they managed to keep their village looking so nice. The crimson fluid pouring out of where the head of the jounin Kira just killed dripped onto the ground below. The red color clashed with the sky and yet gave it a very poetic harmony of life and death.
Kira can see the the smoke of the burning bank as it continues to burn, and from the looks of it, the fire had in fact spread through out the village, burning about fifteen buildings and about seven houses. The inferno was in fact the colors that Kira thought they would be, blue at the base, orange through out most of it, and the tip are a bright yellow color that lit up the darkening evening sky over the village hidden in the fire.
Kira jumps into the air, gaining height by pushing chakra into his feet and pushing off, basically doing the opposite of the tree climbing jutsu. Kira then does some hand signs and shouts "great breakthrough" and demolishes the building, killing two hiding genin in the process. A beam from the structure had hit them in the head, killing them by breaking the skull and causing bits to pierce their brains. As Kira landed on the rubble he noticed he was surrounded by a group of chuunin who looked like they wanted Kira dead at all costs.
Kira sighs and says "you know, this would never have happened if you guys did not attack us". Most of the chuunin looked perplexed but one came forward and said "that may be true, but was there a need to insult us by only sending in one ninja?". Kira smiles a little and says "well if you want I can be many". Kira then makes several typhoon clones and they all use the dragon flame bullet jutsu, causing all but one of the chuunin to run. The one that did not flee to avoid the blow died. The Kiras then flicker after the chuunin, meeting them half way and striking with their blades, killing a few, leaving only two remaining. The clones charge at them and are cut down, severely damaging the chuunin in the process. Kira making a single hand sign finishes them off with his vacuum sphere jutsu. Kira spits out ten spheres of wind that shoot towards the two ninja and kill them on impact with the throat and kidneys. As they lay bleeding out Kira smiles and takes the sword of one and throws it into a wall and watches as it pierces and suddenly the wall shatters. The man's last words are "what are you?". Kira smiles darkly and says "a monster".
Kira looks at the dead bodies and walks away, moving deeper into the white village. Kira looks at a sign and notices that it is the village hospital. Kira gets an idea and walks inside to see ninja injured trying to put out the fire or trying to catch Kira and fighting fellow villagers thinking he was in disguise. As a medical ninja trys to stop Kira, he stabs him and then walks to the lowest floor of the hospital and and set three explosive tags on a gas tank for the heating and flickers out as they explode, blowing up the hospital and killing everyone inside.
The rubble from the hospital was covered in charred pieces, and body parts of the newly deceased could be seen littering the road. At Kira's feet is the hand of a man who had just been admitted with severe burns. Kira was unaware of this but continued to venture on towards what looked like the chambers of the leader of this backwoods village that nobody knows about or cares about. Kira had nearly wiped the entire thing off the map single handedly.
Kira looks at the destruction he had caused with a little pride, the flames were his doing, the destruction of the hospital was a devastating blow to the village, and all of the ninja who had died would make building back up from this attack damn near impossible. Even if Kira were to be killed, his mission was a success. Kira was amazed he managed to do all of this by himself. He had grown from the weak genin into something that could rival most jounin. In the distance the sound of wood burning in the fire can be heard.
Kira jumps to the left as a kunai flies at him and explodes when it hits a building about ten meters from him. Kira looks at the thrower and sighs. It was a chuunin about Kira's size and weight, but with no weapons. He had brown hair and blonde eye brows with red irises with a black ring on the edges. Kira dashes forward flicking his fingers into his sleeves and drawing his trench knives and punching at the ninja's face with them. The fist flew through the air with the precison of one who has know combat, and it was deflected with difficulty.
Kira then slashes at the chuunin, making contact with his throat killing him with ease. The ninja of this village see, to lack the formal training of most ninja. They fight poorly, lack any sense and seem to be very lazy. Kira deciding that this had taken long enough does several hand signs before saying "typhoon dragon". Up above the village in the sky forms a dark blue dragon whom promptly destroys another building with it's typhoon orb. The explosion on contact causes a schoc wave that destroys all of the surrounding buildings.
Kira smiles as his beast wrecks the village that had tried to cause harm to his beloved home. Kira knew he had a place to go if Iwa was destroyed but did not know if he could put up with being a Konoha ninja, from what he had seen most of them lacked the ability to fight in any capacity. Kira remembered how an Anbu operative could not even raise her fist to an impostor and instead broke down crying like a school girl who had her heart broken. She was alter knocked out and Kira had to drag her to the hospital.
This had irked Kira very much since he was not even from the village and still did more then she had. Kira thought the training methods to be pathetic if the produced an Anbu operative like her. In Kira's mind she could not assassinate anyone and probably never killed anyone before. In the end it did not matter to him since he had never seen her since and did not care about her or about how she had recovered, he did not check on her once, though he did slam her in his report of the events, that he is pretty sure the hokage blew off.
Kira returns to reality as a flaming piece of wood falls from a nearby building and nearly knocks him out. The flames now covered the entire village and was soon to cover every building. The roar of the flames was nearly deafening. The smell of burning wood was overwhelming and it's scent covers Kira's own scent like deodorant does sweaty arm pits and soap covers the scent of dirt. Kita could feel the heat on his body and flickers to the council building. It is the only building not to be burning thanks to a special sealing jutsu that saves it from any fire out of the seal.
Kira walks around knocking on it's sides and occasionally placing exploding tags on the structure in key areas, such as near the base of the structure, where the foundation meets the actual building. As soon as Kira had used all of his explosive tags he jumps back and activates the tags, causing 9 simultaneousness explosions. The explosion was not loud, but was strong enough to cause the building's foundation to fail. The building begins to catch fire as well since ithe explosion was within the seal.
As soon as the foundation failed, the building caught flame and began to fall into the earth below. The integrity of the building had failed without a strong foundation to hold it up. The white building fell into the ground, extinguishing the flames and killed a group of genin hiding from the fighting.l Kira did not know about the genin but decided to sit on the remains of the building and watch as the last of the buildings crumble into dust forever taken from time by a single ninja from a near dead clan. A ninja not many people have heard about. That ninja is Kira Yagami.
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