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Keitaro Satsukari
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Posts : 12
Rank : Jounin
Element : Lightning fire Dark
Major Skill : Large amounts of chakra
Minor Skills : Sleeps and eats little Poison resistance

Ninja Stats
Ryo: 100
Jutsu: Substitution, Doppelgangers, Transformation, Nephilim's curse,The branch's seal,The gift/curse of the elements,Crow Clone Technique ,Snake Authority Spell,Scattering One Thousand Crows Technique,Hidden Shadow Snake Hands,Kai - Release,Shunshin no Jutsu - Body Flicker Technique,Raiton: Thors Cry (Nakigoe Thor),Raiton ~ Hekireki Kumade no Jutsu ,Sandaa Saaburu - Thunder Saber,Static,Raikyuu - Lightning Ball

PostSubject: Keitaro Satsukari   Wed Aug 25, 2010 12:10 pm

Name:Keitaro Satsukari

Age: 19

Village: Konoha

Rank: Jounin

Clan:Satsukari



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Posts : 12
Rank : Jounin
Element : Lightning fire Dark
Major Skill : Large amounts of chakra
Minor Skills : Sleeps and eats little Poison resistance

Ninja Stats
Ryo: 100
Jutsu: Substitution, Doppelgangers, Transformation, Nephilim's curse,The branch's seal,The gift/curse of the elements,Crow Clone Technique ,Snake Authority Spell,Scattering One Thousand Crows Technique,Hidden Shadow Snake Hands,Kai - Release,Shunshin no Jutsu - Body Flicker Technique,Raiton: Thors Cry (Nakigoe Thor),Raiton ~ Hekireki Kumade no Jutsu ,Sandaa Saaburu - Thunder Saber,Static,Raikyuu - Lightning Ball

PostSubject: Re: Keitaro Satsukari   Wed Aug 25, 2010 12:10 pm

Element: Lightning fire
Clan Element: Dark

Any Bloodlines:Devils Eye
The dark eye is the eye granted to users who prefer the fighting aspects of the ninja life along with giving the user the dark element. This eye gives them 50% greater control of any of the elements they use, put the power boost comes at a great price; they slowly lose there minds. Depending on the user different things could happen, some might just completely lose there minds; forgetting who there friends are or they might just lose there minds when fighting and attack anyone they see.

Major skill:
Large amounts of chakra

Minor Skill:
Sleeps and eats little
Poison resistance

Starting Jutsu:
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Imperfections:Late lazy and thick headed

What your character looks like:


Backstory:academy arc
Keitaro was born he was born in the middle of the third great shinobi war what he saw made him want to stay out of the shinobi world but his parents urged him to become a shinobi so he entered the academy younger then most at the age of four in witch he learned the basics he stayed away from most but lashed out at the people who came near him he graduated at 7 and was put on a team with two boy his sensei kept him away from his brother and sister.He was beaten in the academy to the point where he didn't trust anyone not even his brother and sister.

genin arc
There sensei gave them the bell test Keitaro came up with the plan after seeing one of his teammates speed and knowing of the hyuuga's infamous doujutsu and with his own devils eye they got the bell's after a plan of having the fast one use his speed to trick sensei into falling into a trap Keitaro had built where sensei was stuck then witch the hyuuga would trigram sensei to where he couldn't move to then witch when he finally got unstuck Keitaro ran and grabbed the bell's kakashi passed them and they went home for the next year they completed 50 D-rank missions and 4 C-rank.His team mates were killed on a C turned S rank mission they had to fight a powerful missing ninja he watched his team mates die before his eyes he powered up a lightning ball and threw it at the guy shocking him to death his sensei took him back to the village but felt something different about him.

chuunin exams arc
then one day there sensei told them they were going to enter the chunin exams they passed the first test with ease then came the second test in witch sadly one of them died pushing the other out of the way of a falling tree when they got out of the forest the boy had to fight Keitaro as the fight begun his teammate ran at keitaro as he flashed through hand signs and yelled the name of the attack witch was Fire Style: Art of the Dragon Flame his teammate was not thinking it was a strong attack neither was keitaro it had drained every last bit of chakra he had but he could still stand teammate on the other hand was burned to a crisp keitaro dropped to the ground as what seemed to be tears ran down his face.

He walked up next to his mother and half brother to watch his sisters match to which she basically killed the guy he sighed i killed my best friend he was called down for another match he said now keitaro growled in rage as he punched the uchiha in the jaw knocking him out.He now had a month to waist while the second round of part three was under way so he just hung around kiri for a month he was attacked by a ninja from konoha a hyuuga to witch he used his smarts to out run the man before ANBU caught him. When the month was up he had to fight two people a boy named shari and a girl named sue which was said people team mates were killed by his sister his first match was a match against shari he let off a sonic wave witch hurt like hell in return he fired a Fire Release: Fire Dragon Flame Missile at him burning a hole right through him he smirked as he watched him fall his other opponent gave up after seeing what he could do he was one of the people put as chunin they knew what his friend kintaro could do so he was made chunin as well he was a chunin for 4 years but kintaro died a month back fighting a missing ninja by the name of death in witch he hunted him down and killed him he got back in time for the jonin exams

jonin exams arc
which it turned out to pass he had to fight his sensei it was a hard fight for Keitaro he ran at his sensei and flashed through hand signs he blew a stream of fire at him and watched as his sensei dodge Keitaro flashed through hand seals again and made the ground into mud and fired a flame into his sensei dodge again Keitaro was then in front of him and punched him in the jaw breaking it his sensei gave up and he was promoted to jounin.



RP Sample:Wolf said nothing as the hand dragged him down into hell he said nothing when he hit
the ground he did nothing for hours he just sat there until he got up and
walked the way to demon king dabura's castle when he got there
he walked in and saw the demon king waiting for him "are you demon king dabura" wolf asked

"why do you wish to know" said dabura
"i want training I'm weak i need more hate and rage to win the fights" said wolf
the demon king thought "fine i well train you" he said "good more power" said wolf
wolf know knew why they called it hell the training dabura gave out "wolf you well be fighting two demons at once today" said dabura

"when i get back to earth the leader is gonna get the ass kicking of a life time" wolf thought as he blocked another punch
from the demons as he then blasted them both "come on already" he said "pick up the pace" he said as he blocked to more kicks "that's it" he said "DARK BLAST" he yelled wiping the to demons out "good now for your second test you are to go and get me a flaming sword" said dabura "alright" said wolf

Wolf was running threw the fire pits of hell looking for this flaming sword wolf was stopped by a huge demon "stop what are you here for" asked the demon "I'm here for the flaming sword demon king dabura wants it" said wolf "if you want it then you must fight me for it" said the demon rushing at wolf and punching him wolf jumped onto the demons fist and ran up his arm he saw the flame sword he ran down and grabbed it and then jumped up to the demons back and stabbed the sword in it and slide down he then jumped onto the demons head and stabbed him in it killing him wolf walked back to the castle "did you get the sword" said dabura wolf just threw it over to him and walked away

"wolf" dabura said "your final test is a fight against me" dabura said as he drew his sword "fine after this fight may i return to earth" said wolf dabura thought "as you wish" he said wolf flew at him and grabbed the sword and threw it into a tree and punched dabura in the gut dabura then kicked him in the jaw and threw him wolf was gonna finish this quick "DARK BLAST" he yelled and hit dabura with ten blast knocking him out dabura woke up ten minutes later "you may return to earth now" he said snapping his fingers wolf woke up in a grassy plain "hm back on earth finally" he said


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Posts : 138
Rank : Chuunin
Element : Water, Wind
Major Skill : Extremely good senses (apart from sight)
Minor Skills : Good Chakra Control, Medical Skills

Ninja Stats
Ryo: 500
Jutsu:

PostSubject: Re: Keitaro Satsukari   Wed Aug 25, 2010 12:50 pm

DOES NO-ONE READ THE STARTING JUTSU RULES????!!!!!

"Jounin (both kinds) may have starting Jutsu, 6 D-Rank Jutsu, 4 C-Rank Jutsu and 2 B-Rank Jutsu. "

You can't have A-rank jutsu as your starters, & you definately can't have any S-rank!!!

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Posts : 319
Rank : Kazekage
Element : Wind, Earth.
Major Skill : Medical Ninjutsu
Minor Skills : Tracking, Moving Stealthily

Ninja Stats
Ryo: 100
Jutsu: Substitution, Doppelgangers, Transformation

PostSubject: Re: Keitaro Satsukari   Wed Aug 25, 2010 1:00 pm

(Sorry Faith isn't in a good mood...)

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Keitaro Satsukari
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Posts : 12
Rank : Jounin
Element : Lightning fire Dark
Major Skill : Large amounts of chakra
Minor Skills : Sleeps and eats little Poison resistance

Ninja Stats
Ryo: 100
Jutsu: Substitution, Doppelgangers, Transformation, Nephilim's curse,The branch's seal,The gift/curse of the elements,Crow Clone Technique ,Snake Authority Spell,Scattering One Thousand Crows Technique,Hidden Shadow Snake Hands,Kai - Release,Shunshin no Jutsu - Body Flicker Technique,Raiton: Thors Cry (Nakigoe Thor),Raiton ~ Hekireki Kumade no Jutsu ,Sandaa Saaburu - Thunder Saber,Static,Raikyuu - Lightning Ball

PostSubject: Re: Keitaro Satsukari   Wed Aug 25, 2010 3:39 pm

Fixed
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Posts : 138
Rank : Chuunin
Element : Water, Wind
Major Skill : Extremely good senses (apart from sight)
Minor Skills : Good Chakra Control, Medical Skills

Ninja Stats
Ryo: 500
Jutsu:

PostSubject: Re: Keitaro Satsukari   Thu Aug 26, 2010 2:52 am

Better ^_^

You now have:
2 B-rank - great Smile
4 C-rank - great Smile
5 D-rank - Good, but you're allowed 1 more.
7 E-rank.......... >.<

Let me clarify this for everyone, because it seems to be the part none of you are reading:
"Academy Students start with Substitution, Transformation, Doppelgangers. These are the academy/starter jutsu."

Yes, I understand that as a Jounin, your character almost definately would know all those other E-rank jutsu, i.e. rope escape, water walking etc. but according to Lost's rules... THEY CAN'T! You need to train for them! I know it's a pain, but deal with it & accept that your character can't start off knowing them!
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Posts : 12
Rank : Jounin
Element : Lightning fire Dark
Major Skill : Large amounts of chakra
Minor Skills : Sleeps and eats little Poison resistance

Ninja Stats
Ryo: 100
Jutsu: Substitution, Doppelgangers, Transformation, Nephilim's curse,The branch's seal,The gift/curse of the elements,Crow Clone Technique ,Snake Authority Spell,Scattering One Thousand Crows Technique,Hidden Shadow Snake Hands,Kai - Release,Shunshin no Jutsu - Body Flicker Technique,Raiton: Thors Cry (Nakigoe Thor),Raiton ~ Hekireki Kumade no Jutsu ,Sandaa Saaburu - Thunder Saber,Static,Raikyuu - Lightning Ball

PostSubject: Re: Keitaro Satsukari   Thu Aug 26, 2010 9:24 am

xD sorry been working on other things and not really pating much attention to this app xD.
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Posts : 319
Rank : Kazekage
Element : Wind, Earth.
Major Skill : Medical Ninjutsu
Minor Skills : Tracking, Moving Stealthily

Ninja Stats
Ryo: 100
Jutsu: Substitution, Doppelgangers, Transformation

PostSubject: Re: Keitaro Satsukari   Thu Aug 26, 2010 10:06 am

Take your time.

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Posts : 12
Rank : Jounin
Element : Lightning fire Dark
Major Skill : Large amounts of chakra
Minor Skills : Sleeps and eats little Poison resistance

Ninja Stats
Ryo: 100
Jutsu: Substitution, Doppelgangers, Transformation, Nephilim's curse,The branch's seal,The gift/curse of the elements,Crow Clone Technique ,Snake Authority Spell,Scattering One Thousand Crows Technique,Hidden Shadow Snake Hands,Kai - Release,Shunshin no Jutsu - Body Flicker Technique,Raiton: Thors Cry (Nakigoe Thor),Raiton ~ Hekireki Kumade no Jutsu ,Sandaa Saaburu - Thunder Saber,Static,Raikyuu - Lightning Ball

PostSubject: Re: Keitaro Satsukari   Thu Aug 26, 2010 10:17 am

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Rank : Kazekage
Element : Wind, Earth.
Major Skill : Medical Ninjutsu
Minor Skills : Tracking, Moving Stealthily

Ninja Stats
Ryo: 100
Jutsu: Substitution, Doppelgangers, Transformation

PostSubject: Re: Keitaro Satsukari   Thu Aug 26, 2010 10:21 am

All apart from jutsu - being looked over in discussions - APPROVED

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Major Skill : Medical Ninjutsu
Minor Skills : Tracking, Moving Stealthily

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Ryo: 100
Jutsu: Substitution, Doppelgangers, Transformation

PostSubject: Re: Keitaro Satsukari   Fri Aug 27, 2010 12:27 pm

Is this jutsu ok?

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